
[The beauty and worth of rain is not fully exploited due to the way we are; the way our cities are]
Rain Rain Go Away !
So beautiful is my motherland
in it a not so fairy land in my presence
chennai in its essence
chunk of jasmine buds hung on the sky roof
got dropped steadily in my presence
rain droplets in its essence
so intense and so forceful it proceeded
the milky way galaxy street turned brown in my presence
flooding water in its essence
much filled were the lakes more filled were the rivers
more filled were the thirsts of many in my presence
water the elixir in its essence
And it goes on and on !
as i intend to describe you
but a 'no' at my breath
for you also had brought harmful diseases, a quite in number
felt to its quick my mind explored
you are pure at start so much
the divorced wastes from us pollutes you too much
our way of lifestyle being the reason very much
yes ! our cities are not ready to receive you very much
So, delightful at my heart
nostalgic in my eyes
i keep looking for you in that fairy land of my dream !
Rain Rain Come Again !!!

4 Comments:
Hi Friends,
Please let me know ur comments/feedback about my collections. No matter it's abt the theme,language,flow and ???? jus step n to comments and drop ur valuable thoughts.
Cheers,
Damu.
Thanks !!!
Hi Damodharan!
I am no poet.. but will sure let u know what i felt. You have very beautiful ideas and r creative in your expression of them! I loved this poem of yours! However, at some places the poem loses a bit of its crunch because you have tried to make it sound rhyming.. which may not always be necessary in poems? .. But overall..awesome!
Raji
Thanks Raji !!!
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